[ALPHA] Typos and Grammar

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  1. aReclusiveMind

    aReclusiveMind Developer Grand Admiral

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    • When framing another empire, it says: "FRAMMING OPPORTUNITY" instead of "FRAMING OPPORTUNITY".
    • When framing another empire, the text should be adjusted as follows:
    CURRENT: "Choose who shall <LEADERNAME> frame for the tech stealing
    (diplomatic relations between the sabotaged and framed empires will deteriorate):

    SUGGESTED: "Which empire should <LEADERNAME> frame for stealing the technology?
    (diplomatic relations between the sabotaged and framed empires will deteriorate)

    CURRENT: "Choose who shall <LEADERNAME> frame for the leader influencing
    (diplomatic relations between the sabotaged and framed empires will deteriorate):

    SUGGESTED: "Which empire should <LEADERNAME> frame for influencing their leader?
    (diplomatic relations between the sabotaged and framed empires will deteriorate)

    There are probably others I haven't come across yet as well.
    • Diplomacy - Gift giving a modest sum of credits can lead to this response: "It's a punny gift, but we'll take it anyway." I assume "punny" should be "puny".
     
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  2. Adam Solo

    Adam Solo Developer Administrator Grand Admiral

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    Thanks, we'll revise the text as you propose.
     
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